The Mirror of Merlin

An amazing book about Merlin and his journey in the Haunted Marsh.
This book will reveal many secrets about Merlin and his journey
to Britannia and help King Arthur become the world's best known
king. Merlin travels with his loved one, Hallia of the Mellwyn-Bri-Meath Clan.
Though I have to say that the whole story started with a dumb incident.
Which was to transport a creature back where it came from-The Haunted Marsh
Meh, it was agreeable not too shabby but I'll explain the flaws in the book.
FLAWS:
1. The story revolves so much on description that you will put it
down for a while and think it should have gone for poetry.

2. The story goes so fast, it might leave you confused.

3. The setting isn't too big for the desired adventure.

4. Some characters are way under-developed, just focusing on Merlin and Hallia.

5. Too many thoughts about inner Merlin. Fatal flaw of 1st person point of view.




-Mustachio Man